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finished work from a skecht that I attach in my previos journal.

Saludo by Repzen 

for the background I use one of my gallery photo. (I took a lot pictures :) )
Thanks for your critique this work. It start as skecht (as you can see my lineart is not detailed as other works) it took me aorund 5 hours to make it. it was a fast work.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Okay it's been a while since my last critique but i'm going to try to give some good feed back.


To start i'd have to say that you used some beautiful colors and i love her clothes. She looks evened out and proportionate and her hair looks naturally "flowy". The shading is also nicely done. I love the detail of the heart hair tie and clip not to mention the way you drew and colored her open eye looks very professional. The way you have light reflect off parts of her is also very natural and well done. Your lines are very clean.

However I did find four things that didn't seem right. first is that her blush seems a little to dark so i suggest maybe making it a shade lighter. Also her hand is not entirely natural because i'm not sure if it's just me but when i do that my pinkie and finger not only touch but the pinkie goes down farther than the other finger. The strands of hair near her purple bracelet are transparent where they cross. The hair is not a big problem so i wouldn't worry to much about it. The final problem i have is the shadows on her arm left arm (from where i'm facing) I feel it would look better if her entire arm is shadowed but like the other problems above these are just my opinions and suggestions.

Aside from my problems with it i think that this piece is very well done and i hope your proud of it because you have every right to be.